Lovely :D
I like this MJTTOMB! I feel like there couldn't be any other instrument better than the piano to display such emotions (You can tell what's my favorite instrument, heh).
After reading the lyrics, the song now has a new meaning. This is not only sad, but also a bit cheerful.. I truly admire anyone with such abilities, being able to change moods within the same piece is one of the aspects in music that I enjoy most. And you have done a wonderful job on that. Congratulations.
It's great that you changed this to minor, in major it could have sounded way too cheerful for the lyrics.
It's a great melody, a friend of mine told me that anyone can come up with a good melody, but its what you do with that melody that counts. So you did a wonderful job on the accompaniment, it really sets the atmosphere.
Just one little complaint. I wasn't really happy with the ending, it's kind of sudden because there was nothing warning me that it was about to end. Like a ritardando part or fading out (I'm glad you didn't fade out tho, I don't like 'em).
But I understand you must respect the original melody, so it's not a big deal.
I'll listen some of you other stuff, you kept my interest.
By the way, I did read what you said at BrokenRequiem's post. Maybe you might wanna check out my stuff, I always appreciatte suggestions from real musicians.
5/5 + fav'd!
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