Lovely
It'd be more interesting if you told us what the song is about, though. Oh well, I can do like the rest of the non-sang music: feel what is it about.
Now, you have to find a program that fixes your recording problems. the volume suddenly goes up for a few moments. But hey, being your first submission is not bad at all. It's defenitely a lot better than mine haha. The instrumentation is nice overall, I really couldn't tell if the violins were there as a background or if they were interacting with the main melody with another one. They're barely audible, but that's probably how they are meant to be played. Don't get me wrong, I loved how the came in. They complemented the song perfectly.
About the piano, I'm not sure if it's the software you're using but I think you are not using any pedals. It'd sound a lot better that way.
As I said in the other review, you have a great voice. But you might wanna improve that "Uho-o-uououo" at 3:48. I just got this thing against the whole "uohuouo" thing, sorry.
One more thing, the ending suddenly cutted. That cuts the listeners inspiration, so try not to do it again please. Oh well, at least it was not a fade out ;)
And now, if you excuse me I have work to do. I must study your way to compose melodies (You chinese people... I don't know how you do it). Maybe I'll find your secret and learn "The chinese way" lol :D
Anyway, great job on this! And welcome to the newgrounds audio portal.
It's exciting to upload your first work isn't it?
5/5
Fuoco